Here are our some of our examples:
Lucy - The light whispered to me as I walked in the park of darkness
Sophie - The sun smiled at me as it travelled across the blue sky
Ollie - The flames ate the houses
Pearse - The flames danced from house to house wildly.
Fred - The fire hopped house to house.
Caitlin - The sun winked at me in the dazzling light.
Archie - The fire swallowed houses as it went along.
Leo - The rocket punched through the air like a boxer.
Hayden - The security cameras stalked me as I ran past like the wind.
Alex - The snow drifted across the sky like a river of ice.
Chloe - The snowy frost hugged my car.
Jack - The ambulance sang to me as I was walking.
Fred - The storm clapped as loud as a drum.
Molly - The stars winked at me as I walked by.
CC - The waves chased me as I surfed.
Charlie - The wind pulled the umbrella from my hand.
Arabella - The sea wandered around me as I swam in the sea.
Hannah - The wind whispered to me as I walked by.
Athena - The birds sang as loud as an opera singer.
Anna - The leaf fluttered like a fairy while it sky dived down to the earth.
Zach - The fire hopped from house to house.
Robbie - The quicksand hugged me as it pulled me in.
Isabella - The sun danced like a ballerina as I looked up at it.
Henry - The popcorn walked along the floor.
Peter - The tree waved to me as I walked past.
Millie - The sand threw itself across the beach.
Hunter - The wind whispered to me as I skipped by.
Wow great examples - personification makes for excellent creative writing and given those examples I reckon you guys will be writing some awesome stories!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing room 12 I love all the examples
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Room 12 I love all the examples.
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